I'm enjoying most of the comments this 'verse is generating. Readers seem to be giving me very in-depth comments instead of "I like this" - and those short comments are great, of course, but it's cool to see just how much thought readers are putting into this!

What I've mentioned on AO3 (and not here) is that this fic is written in third person limited. It throws some people. I was trying to get everyone in Dean's head, and with the comments I'm getting, I've done that. Not everything you read is as it seems because it's from Dean's POV and no one else's.

This is also challenging me, but I'm having a good time with it, and I think it gives the fic intensity. Glad you're still enjoying it :)